I've never read the Itazura Na Kiss manga nor seen the drama yet. But i hope to one day. Anyway, whilst reading your summary, my fingers itched to type out the novelized version of the story.
 
So here it is. Below is MY version of what happened that day. Of course, as all good fan fic writers know, All Standard Disclaimers Apply.
 

Itazura Na Kiss – The Marriage Proposal

By: Ghostwriter

 

“Will you marry me?”

 

Kinnousuke’s words kept ringing in Kotoko’s ears even though she desperately tried to push them away.

 

“Irie Naoki will never repay your love. You will make me a very happy man if you marry me, Kotoko-chan, and in turn I’ll make you a very happy woman.”

 

It’s true, Kotoko thought brokenly. Irie Naoki will never love her. She has been playing the fool from the day they met – openly proclaiming her love for him.

 

Irie-kun is right. I’ve been the big baka all along. Kin-chan is also right; my love will never be returned.

 

Something somewhere has to go.

 

***

 

“Irie-san!”

 

Naoki turned around to see two girls waving at him. He immediately recognized them as Kotoko’s girl friends. Kotoko’s presence must have been rubbing off on him lately, because he actually stopped and waited for them to walk up to him.

 

“Have you heard about Kin-chan and Kotoko-chan?” Satomi asked after the usual pleasantries had been exchanged.

 

“What about them?” Naoki asked casually. No doubt, Kinnousuke had done something again in an attempt to win Kotoko’s love.

 

But of course, that baka’s heart belongs to me, Naoki thought, almost proudly.

 

“Kin-chan proposed!” Zinko burst out happily.

 

“Yes, and Kotoko-chan is going to answer him today,” Satomi continued, studying Naoki carefully.

 

“Kin-chan has been so brave! He actually popped the question at her even thought she has turned him down again and again!” Zinko continued happily, oblivious of the stunned look Naoki wore on his face.

 

“And I think Kotoko-chan might accept him this time around,” Satomi confided.

 

Satomi’s words hit home. Naoki couldn’t pin point the feeling he was experiencing at the moment.

 

What if the baka really says yes?

 

He had always openly scorned her love for him, but of late, he couldn’t help but notice that she had grown kind of distant. And he had always taunted Kinnousuke by saying the one Kotoko likes is him. And of course, he had always gotten the last word.

 

What if Kinnousuke had finally gotten the last word this time around?

 

Can it be that Naoki had finally lost in the end?

 

***

“Please give me a bit more time to think it over.”

 

Kinnousuke looked at Kotoko seriously. Unlike Naoki and his indifference to her, Kinnousuke has always seen her as a woman.

 

“Iie – Kotoko-chan, it is no use putting it off. You have to answer sooner or later.

 

“I cannot. Not now,” Kotoko said, looking away.

 

“Kotoko-chan, look at me,” Kinnousuke tilted her chin to make her meet his eyes. “May I kiss you?”

 

Before Kotoko could react, Kinnousuke had already pulled her close to him.

 

Memories of her first kiss with Naoki flashed through her mind.

 

“Irie-kun,” she whispered as she pushed Kinnousuke away.

 

“It’s still him isn’t it? Six years, I’ve waited six years and in the end, it is still Irie Naoki!” Kinnousuke shouted angrily.

 

“Gomen nasai (I’m sorry),” Kotoko whispered tearfully before she turned and fled, leaving behind a devastated Kinnousuke.

 

Kinnousuke could only stare at her back as he realized that he will never be able to have Kotoko’s love.

 

He had always thought that if he waited long enough, Kotoko would wake up from the dream she has been leaving in and see that the one for her in the end would be him, Kinnousuke. But not until this moment did he realize that what he had always thought as a high school girl’s infatuation on the most popular boy would be real love.

 

It seems that Irie has gotten the last word again, Kinnousuke thought glumly as he walked away. He just doesn’t know how lucky he is to have her.

 

A light shower descended as Kinnousuke walked away.

 

***

I would probably never love another man other than Irie Naoki in this lifetime, Kotoko thought miserably as she walked home in the pouring rain. She hardly noticed the cold water pelting her or the warm tears streaming down her face. She stopped short in front of a familiar figure.

 

“Irie-kun.”

 

Naoki was standing right in front of her, in the rain, with an unreadable expression pasted on his face. To Kotoko’s shock and surprised, he was wet from head to toe. She immediately ran up to him.

 

“Why are you standing in the rain? What a silly thing to do, Irie-kun. We need to get you ho - back to your house soon, or else you’ll catch a cold.” Kotoko corrected herself belatedly as she half attempted to lead him in the direction of the Irie residence. It was his home, and not hers.

 

“Nanda yo? (What is it?)” She asked impatiently when he refused to budge.

 

“I was waiting for you,” Naoki said, answering her first question.

 

“You could have waited for me at home,” Kotoko said, but she couldn’t help but feel a tinge of pleasure when he admitted that he had been waiting for her. “Or at least carry an umbrella!”

 

Naoki studied her intently, “Did you see him?”

 

“Who?” Kotoko was genuinely puzzled by now. First, the level headed Naoki was standing in the heavy rain without an umbrella, stating that he was waiting for her. And there was also that weird expression on his face.

 

“Did you say yes?” Naoki continued.

 

“You mean about Kin-chan’s proposal?” Kotoko asked, wondering how he heard about it. A new horror struck her. Could it be that Kin-chan actually talked to her father before he asked her and her father had talked to Naoki’s parents?

 

“Well, don’t worry about it,” Kotoko said jokingly. “At least someone else wants me. You won’t be stuck with me forever.”

 

“Did you say yes?” Naoki persisted tersely.

 

“It is none of your concern,” Kotoko replied, flaring up. This was getting on her nerves. They were standing in the middle of a heavy downpour with him interrogating her about her personal life. He had never cared about her all along. Maybe he was just happy that Kin-chan’s proposal signaled the exit of her intrusion in his life.

 

“That’s true,” Naoki answered stonily.

 

“Don’t you even worry,” Kotoko said angrily. “I’ll be moving out very soon and you can get on with you life. You can marry Sausuiko-san and I’ll marry Kin-chan! Heck, we may even be able to convince our parents’ to let us have a double wedding!”

 

“Do you love him?”

 

“Of course I love him!” Kotoko continued her ranting. “Kin-chan has loved me since junior high, which is longer that the time I’ve loved you.” She deliberately said the last part in past tense, hinting the fact that she no longer feels anything for him any longer.

 

“Do you have to love someone just because they love you?” Naoki asked her.

 

“What is wrong with that?” Kotoko demanded. She added bitterly, “At least he didn’t waste six years like me waiting for someone whom in the end decides to marry another woman!”

 

Naoki slapped her on the cheek, hoping to calm her down. Her revelations stunned him and for the first time, he realized how much his indifference towards her had hurt her. But his action only served to provoke Kotoko further.

 

“Irie Naoki,” she said in a determined voice. “You cannot affect my life any longer because I don’t love you anymore!”

 

Something snapped in Naoki when he heard those words. “That’s not true! The man you love is me and you cannot love another man!”

 

“It’s true, but what can I do about it?” Kotoko shouted at him. “You don’t feel the same about me. Irie Naoki, you’re truly a selfish person. You can’t expect me to wait for you forever!” Tears were flowing freely from her eyes as she said this.

 

Suddenly, Naoki grabbed her and kissed her forcefully on the lips. He then hugged her tightly as he whispered in a matter of fact voice to her, “You cannot love another person other than me.”

 

“The second time,” Kotoko said in a stunned voice.

 

“Iie – no, the third,” Naoki said, still holding her.

 

“What?” Kotoko asked, not getting his meaning.

 

“Nothing,” He said softly as he kissed her cheek.

 

“Let’s go home,” Naoki suddenly said as he pulled Kotoko in the direction of his house.

 

“Why?” Kotoko asked, confused. All the happenings in one day has somewhat stunned her brain which operated in the simplest mode.

 

“Because there is something I need to do,” Naoki told her as he rang the doorbell.

 

A very glum Mama answered the door and she gasped in shock when she saw that both of them were drenched. “What happened?”

 

Naoki ignored her pointedly and demanded, “Is Kotoko’s father home?”

 

“Yes,” Mama answered, “But…”

 

Naoki brushed passed her as he half dragged Kotoko towards the living room with Mama following behind them. When he appeared at the doorway, Sai, Papa and Yuki’s surprised faces looked up at him. Not from the fact that both of them were dripping wet and Naoki had his arm around Kotoko possessively, but because Naoki that serious and determined look on his face.

 

The look that always got him what he wanted.

 

He released Kotoko and bowed dutifully to Sai and asked in a solemn tone, “Aihara-san, will you please give me your daughter’s hand in marriage?”

 

Silence filled the room, before Yuki broke the silence.

 

“You’ve got to be kidding me! I don’t want her as my sister-in-law!”

 

Everyone started talking at once. Mama was clapping her hands in delight whilst Papa looked worried. Yuki was complaining that he didn’t want a klutz as his brother’s wife and Mama smacked the back of his head lightly when he said that. Sai held out his hand and everyone stopped talking.

 

“You two are too young to get married,” Sai began. “You have a whole life ahead of you and you shouldn’t make rash decisions.”

 

“I don’t plan to get married so soon, but after Papa’s company has settled down both of us have completed our studies. I don’t intend to lose her to anyone else.”

 

Yuki heaved a sigh of relief, “Baka Kotoko won’t be my sister in law after all.”

 

Mama hit him on the head again and demanded, “Why do you say that?”

 

“Knowing baka Kotoko, she might never finish her studies,” Yuki replied snidely, only to earn him another whack on the head.

 

“Naoki-kun, are you sure about this? My daughter is not your picture of a perfect Japanese wife. She can’t fry an egg without nearly burning down the house, her flower arrangement looks worst than the weeds in the backyard and she can’t pour tea without scalding herself.”

 

“Otou-san! (Father!)” Kotoko gasped at her father’s blunt recollection of her various faults.

 

“I know every one of them,” Naoki said. “And I learned of them the hard way.”

 

Sai’s face softened at his admission. “But there is one good thing about her; she is rather good at loving.”

 

“I know,” Naoki said softly.

 

Sai smiled approvingly at him. “Very well then, you two have my blessings.”

 

Mama started crying with joy and hugged Kotoko, her future daughter in law. Her fondest wish had been granted and those two are finally going to get married. Papa wondered how to explain things with Sasuiko-san’s grandfather. But when he remembered that he too had encouraged his son to marry for love, he too congratulated them.

 

Yuki kept muttering things darkly but deep down, he was also glad for Kotoko and Naoki.

 

The events of the day proved to be too much for Kotoko as she fainted dead away.

 

***

Do tell me what you think about it. Am I far off the mark. I do try to follow the sequence of events but added my own two cents along the way.

 

Thank You.

 

Ghostwriter

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